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With outmost pride I present you my one and only main: Aspenstar!

What can I say? Aspenstar or Aspenfur, as she is not yet the leader in my fanfiction, is my first oc I ever made. Okay well, she TECHNICALLY is, since she was called Dawnheart, -beware the cringe- a white bengal she-cat, when I created her all these years ago. And as you may recognize, she is not a bengal she-cat anymore.
I changed her design and story a lot since I grew older and more mature over the years. I changed her first to be a silvery-grey tabby she-cat with whit paws, then over the time her white markings grew bigger until she had only splotches of silver tabby left. Then, she continuosly became more brown and her white markings became smaller again, while at the same time, her tabby stripes became a classic tabby pattern.

Her backstory changed too.
To put it short: Dawnheart was a member of StoneClan, who was an outcast. She then changed to LakeClan where she was accepted. She somehow was suddenly adored by all toms (god that makes me cringe xD) and fell in love with a tom from GorgeClan. They had kits, she became leader until in a battle against the DF she died. END

Now her story is a lot less cringy. She and her brother Nutkit were born into ShadowClan, until their mother was accused of murdering their father in a battle against ThunderClan when they were barely two moons old. They left th clan thereafter and met a loner called Silver. He took them in and after their mother -Brambleflower- died a few moons later, he became their 'father'. They knew he wasn't their true father, but they were pretty attached to him anyways.
One day the two siblings made a bet of who would dare go deeper into ShadowClan-Territory until they met their former den-mate Goldpaw. They began to fight as they didn't recognize each other until some warriors stopped their fight and brought them back to ShadowClan-camp, where they were took hostages. 
Most of the cats however recognized them. They were offered to rejoin ShadowClan, but refused to. Silver then came to their aid and wanted to get thm back home, but the leader, Ashstar, denied them their way out. He repeated his offer which, which Silver, Aspen and Nut (they lost the prefix due to not beeing clan-cats) refused again. They discussed for a while until they came to the agreement, that the two young cats should atleast stay a moon to witness how clan-life was like.
They however decided to stay when the moon was over and became the young warriors Nutpelt and Aspenfur. Soon Aspenstar had her first litter with a tom called Flameheart, but their only kit died after she was made a warrior. Then, after some time had passed, she gave birth to Thornkit and Redkit, but Redkit died, too.
A while after Aspenfur was made deputy and Thornkit became Thornpaw, Flameheart followed them to StarClan. Soon after that Thornkit became Thornberry and Aspenfur stepped into Ashstars place, becoming Aspenstar of ShadowClan.

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So what do you think? Did your ocs undergo such a drastic change?
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OH my goodness, I love her so much! Everything about your art blows me away, it's so stunning and so gorgeous! ;u; < 333


I think the OC's of mine that underwent the most drastic changes where Stealthfur and Hazel, as they where my first ever Warrior's OC's (2009/2010) and I revamped them for WCRPP! ^u^
Hazel was a ShadowClan cat called Hazel-leaf and was an incredibly shy softy! He's now a lot more out-there, sarcastic, jolly and quite old-fashioned in the way he speaks and acts! And the biggest change is now he's a rogue, with a gentic defect that makes him abnormally large!

Stealthfur was from 'TimberClan' and was basically a Squirrleflight rip-of, with 100% hunting skills and was perfect at all times DX But now she's undergone a huge design change, moved to SkyClan, and she's now a huge thinker, and spends more time day-dreaming than doing anything, and has her mental issues (when paired with manipulation from the Dark Forest and stress from half of SkyClan being wiped out by redcough, became the slightly demented Stealthstar that we have in WCRPP! Although, she just has a lot of heart that's in the wrong place :( )